Thursday, August 8, 2013

Creat writing, cliff-hanger



  • Young The Giant :You
    천하장사_이동욱 -GreCliffhanger: The giant and Danial were at the giant's world and a few years later, the giant's babies were born so they always played with Danial. But Danial was always very bored. So the giant said, "Do you want to go to school?" So Danial said, "Yes!!" Then Danial went to a school, but she came to the giant's house with her friends! But she doesn't have her human mother. So the giant said, "You can't bring your friends! But she said, "Sorry, but show your face to my friends only once." So she showed her face to her friends. But they enjoyed watching her face and wanted to come to her house. So they always came to her house to see her face. And they made deep friendships. So when they grew up the giant died. So they always watched her picture and they loved that giant. And when they grew up, the giant's babies were there, so they met and they lived together, because before Danial was baby, the giant took care of her. So she wanted to take care of the giant. So she took care of the giant and they lived a very good life.
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    2. Remember that a cliffhanger leaves the reader in suspense! A cliffhanger is an stoppage where the reader is left wondering what will happen next.

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